ext_102706 ([identity profile] engelen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] arthoniel 2010-05-07 04:54 am (UTC)

I think she's got a lot of potential as an artist, but she's still gotta mature. For her age and target audience those lyrics are ok, but eventually as you get older you end up unfffing at more abstract stuff like "when the paralytic dreams that we all seem to keep drive on engines till they weep with future pixels in factories far away"

But yeah, liek I said, I hope she keeps on working hard and out of too much trouble. I'd hate seeing her talent go to waste...

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